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备考MBA2019:MBA英文写作评分标准和范文分析

来源 :读研MBA(http://www.jcmba.com/) 时间: 2018-08-01 17:23:02

  对于准备备考2019年MBA联考的学员来说,想要让自己顺利的通过考试,则要对功课有很大的信心,尤其是让很多朋友都认为较困难的英语。为了让考生的英文成绩有所提高,竟成MBA小编在下文中为大家详细讲述了有关MBA的英文写作评分标准和范文分析。

  MBA联考英语写作评分标准是:

  18~20分档:中心思想明确,切中题意,条理清楚,用词恰当,无语法、结构错误。

  14~17分档:中心思想较明确,基本切中题意,条理较清楚,用词较恰当,有些语法、结构错误。

  10~13分档:中心思想基本明确,基本切题,条理基本清楚,用词还恰当,语法、结构错误较多。

  6~9分档:中心思想不够明确,基本不切题,缺乏条理性,重大语法、结构错误较多。

  0~5分档:中心思想不明确,不切题,没有条理性,重大语法、结构错误很多。

  在实际评卷过程中,绝大多数考生的成绩在6~14分之间。

  现就6分和14分的作文各选一篇,抄录 6分篇

  Today cigarette smoking is a widespread habit all over the world. In developing country. There are more and more smoker. Evenly including children. In china. We often see some smoker in the store, street and so on. In spite of government prohibit smoking in public occasion. Many heavy smokers say they cannot give up smoking. I have lots of friend to smoke. I once persuade them to give up smoking. But they answer: "In fact I want to give up smoking too. I have once tried to do it. Finally I found it is impossible to give up smoking.‘ It isn‘t right. My father had been smoker for thirty years. Now he have gave up smoking. It‘s well know. "There is a will, there is a way" Cigarette smoking is a threat to health. In morden times, Health is money. Life short but work is much. For your healthy family, smoker must give up smoking.

  这篇作文基本切题,但语法错误较多,且是一些非常基本和严重的语法错误,如第三人称单数、单复数、分词、断句等,而且文章基本上是按汉语腹稿一字一句翻译过来的。

  14分篇:Today cigarette smoking is a widespread habit all over the world. Many governments put severe restrictions on the product and sale of cigarettes. But still many people take it, and some of them are very young, include some high school students. It has been a social problem that all the world should deal with seriously. Many heavy smokers say that they can‘t give up smoking. They complain that there is not an effective method to make them get rid of the habit. But in my view, what is really important is not the method but the will. They need a hard determination as well as a good method. As the Chinese saying goes, where there is a will there is the way. If you know smoking is harmful to your health, you will try every way to stop smoking. Cigarette smoking is a threat to health. Studies have proved that many diseases such as lung cancer are due to excessive smoking. And it will not only do harm to the smoker‘s health, but also do harm to his family, his workmate and many other people who don‘t smoke. So we need to make efforts to let the smokers know what the smoking really brings us and help them to give upsmoking.

  这篇作文切题,表达思想清楚,尽管有一些语法错误,但文字仍属连贯,所以得分较高。

  因此,考生在写作过程中应尽量避免语法错误,特别是要尽力避免低级语法错误。

  许多考生可能都有这样的经历,有些错误经人一提醒,自己马上就能看出来。

  为了避免这类错误,争取获得一个较高的印象分,在作文做完后仔细检查一下是一个不错的措施。

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